Research and Planning- Feedback on our first shooting of our film opening

We showed our teacher the first shooting of our film opening produced on imovie, we recieved feedback from both the class and our teacher, it was mostly positive and then some improvements to be made. For example, in our initial ideas we said that the character 'Crystal' would have visions of her sister committing suicide at a bridge and 'Crystal' wears a bracelet, it has some importance but she does not know why as she can not fully remember but it was inn fact from her sister. Therefore the feedback which we received questioned "is this shown in the opening" so our teacher suggested to film a flashback scene of the sister committing suicide and the sister giving the bracelet to 'Crystal'. We took this feedback on board and agreed with it as it would be effective if we showed a flashback scene of the sister about to commit suicide and giving the bracelet as it would create more enigma because it would create more questions for the audience.